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how to write a resume summary when you've done too many things

laidoff_lena · 4 replies

okay so here's my problem. 10 years in marketing. i've done brand, demand gen, content, product marketing, and a weird 18-month stint doing customer success because the startup was small enough that meant me. my resume reads like six different people applied for the same job.

every article says 'write a focused summary at the top.' but focused on what? if i write a PMM summary i erase the demand gen work. if i lean into growth i lose the brand equity stuff. and the customer success chapter doesn't fit anywhere without looking like i wandered off.

what i've landed on, three weeks in:

version control your resume, actually. i now have three: a brand/PMM version, a growth/demand gen version, and a generalist version i use when i'm honestly not sure what the role really is. the summary changes, a few bullets swap in and out, but the skeleton is the same. took maybe 3 hours to set up, saves me rewriting from scratch every time.

the summary isn't a bio, it's a pitch. i was writing 'results-driven marketing leader with 10 years of experience across...' which is exactly what every recruiter has trained themselves to skip. what actually got positive recruiter feedback: two sentences, specific function, one number, one directional claim about what you're good at. that's it.

example of what i cut: 'versatile marketing professional skilled in cross-functional collaboration and go-to-market execution' (meaningless).

example of what i kept: 'PMM with 10 years building launch playbooks for B2B SaaS products. launched 14 features in 2024; specializes in competitive positioning for crowded markets.' boring but readable.

the customer success chapter i just put in a short 'additional experience' note. one line. nobody's asked about it weird yet.

hopefully this helps someone in the same boat. the diversified career is genuinely hard to package. anyone found a better pattern?

4 replies

marketer_mei

the three-version system is exactly right. i resisted it for months because it felt like lying somehow. it's not. you're just meeting the reader where they are. the jobs are actually different too, so your resume should be.

laidoff_lena

yeah it took me a minute to stop feeling weird about it. the content isn't different, just the framing and emphasis. same experience, different camera angle.

consultant_cam

one thing that helped me when i was in a similar spot transitioning out of consulting: figure out the ONE professional problem you're best at solving, and let that anchor the summary. doesn't matter if you've done 8 different things. hiring managers want to know: what does this person do? the summary answers that first, credentials back it up.

ops_omar

recruiter side: i scan summaries for about 4 seconds. if it doesn't tell me function + seniority + some hint of impact in that time, i'm moving on. your second example is much better. the first one i could have copy-pasted onto 60% of the resumes i saw this week.